这次的HRIS的功课改到要我吐血....
以下是让我吐血作品，*代表他们的错字 ~代表比较恰当的
HRIS= Human Resource Information System
*HRIS system ~ HRIS
*it is take time ~it take time
*expert in technology ~Technology expert
*after the system developed, we will be tested. ~after the system fully developed, it will be tested.
*must change the design of the system from day to day (那些design web page 的人不就完蛋？） ~must change the system layout from time to time
*in additions (你要多少个addition?) ~ in addition
*Question such as whether the system is users friendly, dies it meet the needs of all, HRIS being used property, users as determined and does it meet the needs of all.
~Develop the question that asking for the user friendliness of the system and whether it meet the requirements.
*contract us ~contact us
4 comments:
look at the good way, now u are more proficient in English.
You know, after a few year of studies, I thought my English now is actually quite not bad.
But, this sem, I have a project group with one of my groupmate is the exchange student from New Zealand.
Guess what, she said my sentences do not linked to each other. (Frankly, I seldom use connection words, this is why.)
Then I realize, I have much to learn.
Well, u see, i still have a lot to catch up. However, you did really inspired me to learn English online. Now, i am learning through the star " MIND OUR ENGLISH". It is a good website actually especially for people like me...lol
Sometimes, i am envious of your English as you have so many friends that actually give you advise...
Anyway, it is good that we employed the "continuous learning" in our life...unlike some of my friends, i had to cite from AVATAR's dialogue "It is hard to fill a cup that is already full"...lol
April 4, 2010 10:26 AM
aiks...my English also...............................hahaha....sorry for trouble that bring to my group members.>.<
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